Rose caught gaming

I don't think a base work merits a real critique, but ah well. I'll try.

Even for a base work, this is incredibly sloppy. I think you should have colored in the lines around the pants, shirt, and cardigan. I understand this might be hard, but there are many great tutorials out there to teach you how to fix that nasty problem, and that would make it look better.

Also, there should be a little more vitality in this piece, like shading or an interesting background, like a couch or something, because she looks like she's floating.

But most of all, if you ever do any more base work, credit the original owner and link the original base. It's disrespectful of the original creator to not credit him/her.